Just a short story...
It was an argument born of alcohol and
exhaustion, the sort of fight that escalated unreasonably and would evaporate
in an instant if they thought about it. But when they pulled into the parking
lot, they were both wrapped up in the fight, the anger, the hurt. She sat
perfectly still, lost in her head. He circled the car and opened the door.
She turned to look at him, but her eyes looked
through him - unfocused, locked on a distant, unseen point. His words washed
over her like so many unrelated syllables, refusing to order themselves into
words with meaning. She might even have responded automatically, shaking her
head or even answering in a flat, unnatural voice.
He fought back anger and frustration, recognizing
the signs this time. She had shut down, in that odd way she had; seemingly
responsive, she was on the verge of withdrawing into a ball of tears and sobs.
He took several deep breaths. He leaned into the car, grabbing her wrist and
squeezing tight. It took a moment longer than usual - a hesitation as she was
drawn out of the scary place in her head and back into this moment - but her
breath hissed out of her, deflating as she did in response to his touch.
"We are going inside," he growled,
giving her wrist another squeeze to emphasize his command, "You can walk
or..."
She was climbing out of the car before he could
complete the threat. In the room, his words washed over her again, meaningless
sounds. He laid his hand on her bare arm, her eyes snapped to his. "You
don't even know what we were fighting about, do you?"
"Not..." the word stuttered out of her
mouth, "Not really."
He made a frustrated sound and pushed her into
the corner, "Then you can stand there until you want to talk, or I'm ready
to talk."
- - -
He sat on the sofa; she was curled up in his lap.
They spoke quietly, the anger gone from the fight, evaporated as quickly as
spilled vodka.
Powerful and poignant. Nicely written.
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