During a brainstorming
session with Jada for story starters, I came up with this: An argument over a
shoe…not a pair of shoes, but a single shoe. The story has been rattling around
in my head for awhile, but I’ve finally written the first half. For this story,
I return to Melanie and Sara.
Melanie opened the door to the apartment she shared with
Sara, juggling her purse, briefcase, and the bag of groceries she had picked up
on her way home from work. Two steps into the entryway, she stumbled, the
grocery bag tumbling to the floor. Mel caught herself with a hand on the wall,
her shin barking painfully against the bench.
“Fuck, Sara! How many time do I have to remind you to pick
up your shoes?” Mel shouted into the living room, kicking the offending shoe
out of her way and walking through towards the office to deposit her things.
“Pick them up,” she demanded, “And pick up the groceries.”
“Not my shoe,” Sara said lazily from the sofa. She was
wrapped in a quilt, lounging in front of a mindless home design show.
“I beg your pardon!” Mel paused to stare at her girlfriend,
“Which of us leaves her shoes strewn about?”
Sara tore her eyes away from the television, glanced back
into the entryway and shook her head. “It’s not my shoe,” she announced,
sinking back onto the sofa.
Mel dropped her things just inside the office, grabbing the leather
paddle that hung beside the door, and stormed over to the television. She
stabbed the power button, the screen flickering off. She stomped around the
coffee table, yanked the quilt off Sara with one hand and grabbed Sara’s ear
with her other hand.
Sara shrieked as she was pulled to her feet, “Melanie!”
“I don’t want to hear it, Sara. You endanger both of us,
leaving such stumbling hazards everywhere. This isn’t the first time! Get over
the sofa.”
“But Mel,” Sara began, but Mel cut her off by tightening her
hold on Sara’s ear.
“Now,” Melanie demanded.
Sara reluctantly got into position, her legs spread wide and
her bottom thrust out. Melanie laid into the presented backside with the
paddle, striking hard from the first swat. Paddling so hard, cold, quickly
brought Sara to tears.
Melanie reached forward, grabbing her girlfriend by the hair
and pulling her to her feet again. “Pick up the fucking shoe,” she growled.
Sara sniffled, rubbing the back of her hand quickly across
her streaming eyes before walking over to the offending shoe. She picked up the
shoe by the heel, flipping the distinctive red sole at her girlfriend. “It’s
not my fucking shoe,” she announced, vindicated.
Melanie stared at the Christian Louboutin pump she had
purchased only the weekend before, a splurge for her birthday. She hadn’t even
taken the shoes out of the box yet. Melanie took a deep, steading breath before
she asked, “Sara, where is the other one?”
Really hot!
ReplyDeleteI've missed your writing, so good reading your work again. :-)
Lunargirl
Thanks Lunargirl! I've missed writing and reading everyone else's blogs. I've so much to catch up on!
ReplyDeleteHot! I agree with lunargirl. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Craig!
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